Sunday, November 20, 2005

Tied

She felt the rush of water over her head.
The weight around her ankle pulled her under; She could not escape.
"Help!" she screamed silently. Her lungs burnt for oxygen.
Water filled her mouth and nostrils as life left her body.
She woke covered in sweat. Feeling the new band on her
finger, she looked over at her sleeping husband.

5 comments:

me said...

Sorry BC. I published before I read your story so the sequence was not intentional.

Rae said...

first is a killing wave, now is a fight gense di marriage ting. bwoy I tell you. cool still.

Diallo Dixon said...

Ah, so its not just us men that go thru that :-)

And I posted before I read, so didnt mean to have two types of these stories back to back. Sorry B and BC

Bashmentbasses said...

I'm going on Psychiatry next. Feel free to come see me. No charge guys. No drugs either.

The Seeker said...

I LOVE IT!!!!
:D
LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!